recount text the experience during last holliday!??

mengarang ?? jika iya saya akan buatkan
First , pahamilah dulu apa itu recount text !
recount text adalah "sebuah teks yang menceritakan kembali kejadian kejadian yang pernah terjadi sebelumnya , as we know , example is our experiences"

so , next is my experience


"Debate English Experience"

Last week , I joined a Debate English Contest with my friend Dhanny and Septiyan. There's a lot of motion that's we must had to remember all the material. but i got some unlucky experience , I got the motion that i did'nt understand before , it's about political polling , i used to hate politics before , so i must understood about the motion. Also , I got the negative team , it makes me more confused. When the debate is started , I got some nervous , so I can't perform very well. I have lost about the competition but i did'nt wont give up , I will rechange myself , and I would like to say that "Someday , I definitely win this competitions" , just because i've got lost the competitions , i must give up , it's definitely not true , i believe in myself that i have ability to win.

I'm sorry if i got some bad grammar , I'm indonesian native speaker. ^^